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I have always loved
Many woods drizzled and drenched
With fog. Obscure, gray
And the paths are blurry and blasé.
I love unfrizzled, unentrenched
So that every step has a chance
A possibility, if you will, a glance
Into a beautiful destination.

And in the morning
No direction seems more delightful
No angle sharper or more stern
No turn reveals a blemish any eye can discern
Only shades of hopes, designedly unspiteful
Whispering promises of adventure, treasures
The fulfillment of dreams and pleasures
Destinations are beautiful everywhere.

The woods are many
And I am one.

It’s like a fable.
So then
Why
does it
surprise you
that I’m unable
to move?
:iconjoulee:
Sometimes, every once in a rare while late, late at night, I get the urge to write poetry (though I'm not much of a poet besides having an appreciation for the art). And at times it's a personal reflection, and other times it's my imaginative muse conjuring up another person and another environment. I'll leave it up to the reader to decide which. : )

The picture is an old one of mine that I retired some time ago and brought back here in edited form for lack of time in trying to paint something else.

Grazi!
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:iconloa4ever:
Nice feeling about this one.
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:iconjoulee:
thank you! ^_^
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:iconloa4ever:
No problem.
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:iconmerillian:
oh.... great :)
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:iconout-of-chaos:
Wow that looks amazing, atmospheric and beautiful.
:sadangel:
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:iconhouyhnhnm:
It inspired this ...

Many woods - a reply

Many woods have I passed through
What I leave behind grows moss; disappears
Many woods have I passed through
Under old trees like love unaltered
Fettered by earth; memories;
The woods have I passed through:
Saplings inexperienced with roots
Rose bushes of undeniable
Unending pointed ends.
Many woods have I passed through
Where the wish of death and past
The killing fields where we met
Lie stinking rotting flesh
(So like memories)
In the woods I passed
Where a future that never got a chance
Lives past its life there -
Where we chanced upon a swing
And I sat and swung and bent back till my
Head touched the sand:
It made the woods laugh
With the fluttering of birds that took to air.
In the woods we passed through
Where fables were unmade.

You cannot move,
The woods do though.
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:iconzacha:
~Zacha May 27, 2004  Hobbyist Writer
Very good poetry. :thumbsup:
It really gives an emotion, though I can't precise what emotion...
*goes looking for more poetry*
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:icontormentedsorrows:
Beautiful job, especially great ending!
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:iconfrankienexus:
mm i like this, i like the way u describe how u can get so lost in these woods, and how they make u feel, its damn good writing
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:iconalex-sukehiro:
SO VERY GOOD!!!! THIS ROCKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :+favlove:
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